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:iconpipedreamdragon:
This is definitely an eye-catching picture; you managed to bring out all the vibrant colors which makes this object all the more mystical and puzzling in its design.

The only thing I would add to it is maybe sharpen up the focus a little bit. I like how it sort of pops out at you, but at the same time, only half of the image is really clear. You main focus is right in the middle of the object, which is blurry.

Also, you may want to experiment with a darker background. The white is a little straining on the eyes, and giving it a dark background might bring out the colors more.

Overall, its a pretty stunning picture, so fantastic job. : )
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:iconbeeblebroxz:
Thank you for your critique!

This is macro, so it is a little tough with focus. I probably need a better lens.

Thanks!
-Stefan
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*pipedreamdragon Jan 30, 2011  Student General Artist
I'm glad I could help! That was actually my first real critique. ^^;
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